This cover letter looks like everybody else's cover letter. It makes me sleepy.
A hiring manager will feel the same way. Get rid of all redundancies and things everyone else says.
That means you have 3 or 4 sentences to make an impact. In this job market, any longer is going to get you shelved.
In a job market where every sought after IB position gets 100-200 apps, put yourself in the HR person's shoes. He wants focused, and not to read too much. What works in a tight labor market simply won't pass in this one. Think "Vanilla Cover letter (which your example is)=Politically Correct", and "Politically Correct=Undifferentiated=Failure." Thus, "Vanilla Cover Letter = Failure"
A hiring manager will feel the same way. Get rid of all redundancies and things everyone else says.
That means you have 3 or 4 sentences to make an impact. In this job market, any longer is going to get you shelved.
In a job market where every sought after IB position gets 100-200 apps, put yourself in the HR person's shoes. He wants focused, and not to read too much. What works in a tight labor market simply won't pass in this one. Think "Vanilla Cover letter (which your example is)=Politically Correct", and "Politically Correct=Undifferentiated=Failure." Thus, "Vanilla Cover Letter = Failure"
