Quote from rdg:
Doood! That was an epic cliffhanger ending yesterday. I'm sure I wasn't the only one waiting to see how the hero resolved it in the next episode. But we get... nothing?!? I feel cheated.
Quote from rdg:
Someone else has to back me up on this:
The protagonist is long and looking for a bounce. He calls out for it. Bounce! Bounce! His calls go unheeded. The market shits on the living room rug like an untrained labrador and closes early. The audience waits in suspense....
Then it's just on to the next one like nothing happened. WTF? No resolution, no nothing.
At the end of the day we don't care if you win or lose. It's the story that we are interested in. And when the story has holes, it ruins the whole experience.
Quote from rdg:
Someone else has to back me up on this:
The protagonist is long and looking for a bounce. He calls out for it. Bounce! Bounce! His calls go unheeded. The market shits on the living room rug like an untrained labrador and closes early. The audience waits in suspense....
Then it's just on to the next one like nothing happened. WTF? No resolution, no nothing.
At the end of the day we don't care if you win or lose. It's the story that we are interested in. And when the story has holes, it ruins the whole experience.
Quote from jas_in_hbca:
Agree. Story is king. If you show a gun in the first act it better go off in the third.
I hope the protag makes some $$$$ but the reader would like a little drama too : )
Quote from killthesunshine:
but don't try to play my hand..play your own hand.