Quote from Lornz:
There once was a trader on ET
Who thought of himself as a deity
But, without a solid plan,
The shit had to hit the fan
And now he's back to peddling realty.
Quote from Lornz:
Excellent limerick, Lornz!
Quote from oldtime:
well, I didn't want to say anything, but your rhythm is really messed up
99779 is not a rhythm unless you make it rhythmical.Quote from Lornz:
No, it's not. It's a standard 9-9-7-7-9 syllable limerick.
It's not very good, but it's still probably one of the greatest posts ever written on ET.
I will continue to refine my flair for poetry, regardless of what anyone says!
There once was a fellow named oldtime
Who's jokes were without a punchline
He often tried to jest,
But simply lacked the zest
He messed with the best and got flatlined.
Quote from oldtime:
99779 is not a rhythm unless you make it rhythmical.
well, here we go to chit chat
it happens wherever I go
the critics are ragingQuote from Lornz:
With a good delivery it still works. Especially the last one...
Everyone's a critic, I guess.
There once was a terrible rhymer
Who desperately needed a primer
His rhymes simply sucked,
And the rhythm was fucked
Someone should give him a timer.