Quote from traderNik:
T-Dog, sometimes it's hard for people like us to see this, but even the phrase 'the principal focus' would jar on a lot of people. They would say 'the main point' and would not attempt to syntactically link the word 'focus' with the word 'on', because they don't know if it's 'principle' or 'principal' (Pabst falls into this category, as we have seen in his posts in P & R, which are rife with [rife with!!] spelling and grammatical errors, despite his self-professed IQ of 141). Please know that I am in no way suggesting you don't know what you're talking about; this is IMO only. Your paragraph was very well constructed.
There are people who don't have the language skills to construct sentences like this. You have developed them, either by reading or by training.
However, I agree 100% with your premise that a properly constructed paragraph need not come off as snotty. A paragraph can be conversational in tone and grammatically perfect.
Funny. people like us! hahahahahahahahaha
why not judge the intelligence of actors based on the roles they play? remember, the articles are edited profusely at yahoo, your not dealing with fools. do you believe that those who write for the national enquirer or daily news are morons even though their prose is at a 5th grade level? no, my good man, its actually quite the opposite in the real world.
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