This is like a broken record. Page 19 was the first mention. Page 22 he mentioned these terms again. At that point, I was not going to plod through an already poorly enough written book where the author wasn't savvy enough to define his terms when first brought up. I have already said that I gave up at that point, so no ... I did not read the next 98 pages of tortured prose to find his definitions which belonged on page 19.
I have now given far more of my time to Al Brooks than he is worth, so I respectfully bow out of any further discussion here. Thank you.
I think most agree that Al's books are poorly written along with poor editing by the publishing house. Hopefully Al does
not continue using that publishing house after so many complaints. The good ones edit the content to make it clear. They actually have specific people hired to that that for the authors...making +50k per year. Some do contract work for publishing firms at +$40 per hour.
I've seen other authors in similar situations and then
change (switch) to a different publishing house that does better editing.
With that said, I've read many highly technical books in college from microbiology, genetics, bio-chemistry, organic chemistry...I can say the issue involving looking forward in the book to find an explanation is
common.
Almost all my books had sticky note tabs to make it easier to refer to an explanation later in the book for something I was currently reading. For example, something currently read in chapter 7 and then needing to read an explanation in chapter 12 to understand something in chapter 7. In fact, I would join study groups to make sense of all the badly explained info while others felt the book was ok as if it was a
right of passage to learning that everybody must go thru.
In fact, I had a few classes that had technical terms explained in another earlier (prior) book that all students should have read. A
pain in the butt...now I had to read two different books...the other book used as a reference to help me understand content in the current class. Nothing new or surprising about this.
Thus, maybe the way Al writes is something (bad writing habits) he picked up from his days in college from those medical books or science books. He's very old, I wouldn't expect him to change.
The suggestion you made about him needing to do a rewrite or revision is great...many do such...hopefully Al will eventually do the same.
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