Jack. A little advice. I recommend that you write your magnum opus as a series of vignettes. IMO your shortest work is your best work. It seems to focus your attention. Which seems to be increaingly fleeting. And your readers are less likely to fall asleep. Make each post a sparkling jewel of clarity and cogency. Think of Girl Scouts. Or of Jimmy Carter soooooo lonesome down in that submarine all alone without Rosalind for six months. Try to prioritize them. You don't need to use my own rankings of the significance of your work. But I think it would come across so much better as a reasoned logical argument. Pustulates. Theorems. Coronaries. Poofs. The youth of today are not much into gestalt, which IMO is really your thing. Get with it, Pops! Mike.
P.S.: Where to start? IMO, with "Never take a loss. Always scratch." That was the one I had the hardest time with. I never could fucking figure out how not to lose at least three ticks. And BTW, you know I make you look good with my puerile wimpily ineffective attacks. Oh, the sympathy you get! Pauvre Jacques! Mad mean meretricious Merchant! If such fools beset Jack, he MUST be a great man!