I love the graphic design - professional looking!
My suggestions relate to the wording:
You web site says (with my suggestions):
Why Trade Remote (Remotely, because it's an adverb) With Flat Iron?
Flat Iron Trading offers traders (delete the word "traders" it's not needed to make the sentence clear, and it is repeated later in the sentence.) the ability to trade globally from the convenience of your (delete the word "your") home. Some traders are more focused trading out of (change "out of" to from) the comfort of theirhome (delete the word "their"), overseas or on vacation while being (delete the word "being") connected via web-teleconference with other Flat Iron remote traders. Flat Iron provides it's (delete the apostrophe and just use its, or better yet, just deletete the word; it's unnecessary) remote traders with one on one (change to one-on-one) technical support, risk management, and trader support.
Also, even with the above changes, this one sentence isn't working well structurally:
Some traders are more focused trading from the comfort of home, overseas or on vacation while connected via web-teleconference with other Flat Iron remote traders.
It sounds like you are saying this:
Some traders are more focused trading from the comfort of:
1. home,
2. overseas or
3. on vacation while connected via web-teleconference with other Flat Iron remote traders.
I'm not sure what the exact intent is, but I played with it and then realized that the first sentence of the paragraph seems to imply that you are focused on those who trade from home. I would combine the two sentences to make one sentence to imply a trader can trade from anywhere. I played with combining the twoâ¦
"Flat Iron Trading offers the ability to trade globally from any location while connected via web-teleconference with other Flat Iron remote traders. Furthermore, Flat Iron provides its remote traders with one-on-one technical support, risk management, and trader support."
Additionally, the wording elsewhere on the home page could be tweaked a bit too. I would be happy to look it over if the suggestions I already gave aren't too annoying. If you know a writer, and because you live in NY I'm sure you do, have him or her look it over. Journalists are especially good at making every word count.
Congratulations on your business.
Mom